It was like two intro's put togehter to make a song. They don't really even fit together.
The first minute and a half was like a big build up for something that never came.
The second part is better, but again, it kept building up and then: nothing.
I don't think its terrible, but definitely break them up into two separate mixes. I'd even suggest cutting 30 seconds off the first mix, then have it actually pick up a bit with some sort of melody, other than the 3 chords repeating.
As for the second part, its got more potential, but again, dont build up to anti-climaxes. If you just put something after the buildup's it may be worth listening to more than once.
Hope you can take it as constructive criticism. If you think its off base, well, just attribute it to me not really being into that kinda music anyways. I'm more of a metal head.
If you want to hear one of Me and My Bro's songs let me know and I'll throw it up (with their permission).
-Bal.
